Six word stories
Exploration in Hemingway
The most powerful stories are the ones that visually say the least, but mean the most. Ms. B’sheart’s beginning writing for publication class began an activity on Friday October 11, 2013 which was an exercise I found very compelling. The challenge was to write a story in six words like the great Ernest Hemingway. In the 1920’s Ernest Hemingway’s colleagues challenged him that he could not write a story in six words. The featured picture was the result, a powerful story in six words. My classmates and I decided to compile some of the class’s efforts below at this challenge. We invite the entire student body to make their own attempts at the challenge below– please use the comments feature to add your own six word story here!
“Blood, bathroom floor, life goes on.” –Douglas Husic (12)
“Dead dad. Everybody sad. I’m mad.” – Douglas Husic (12)
“Both broken. Come together. Fixed hearts.” – Douglas Husic (12)
“Late night. Apart. I love you.” -Douglas Husic (12)
“God is dead. Maybe, silly Nietzsche.” – Douglas Husic (12)
“Government for the people. Ignores us.” –Douglas Husic (12)
“Everyone loves a Fascist. Especially Germany.” – Douglas Husic (12)
“Communist and a fascist. What ignorance?” – Douglas Husic (12)
“Government shutdown. When hasn’t it been?” – Douglas Husic (12)
“Mary made a mistake; religions followed.” – Blair Sakwa (10) and John Thibideau (12)
“Dinosaurs. Space Rocks. No more dinosaurs.” – Neil Heran (10)
“I love you, you don’t care.” – Ana Rose (10)
“Heart attack. CPR, doctors, nurses, useless.” – Adrian Oliver (12)
“Blank page. Moving pencil. Story born.” – Tori Stark (12)
“High five. Smiles fading. Jail time.” – Dalta Rubenstein (10)
“Mother’s day. Son not home. Iraq.” – Kara Gimby (9)
“A kind word, and wonderful smile.” – Josiah Bromley (10)
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Alison Zywicki • Nov 8, 2013 at 7:49 am
Eyes meet. Looks away. Moment lost.
Tara Naoum • Nov 6, 2013 at 8:32 am
Thinking Big, Saving Money, Getting Nowhere.
Claudia • Nov 6, 2013 at 8:21 am
Six word stories? I’d rather read.
Lena Arabo • Nov 4, 2013 at 10:42 pm
Too much homework from every class.
Joseph summerour • Nov 4, 2013 at 3:31 pm
A red fast car sped by
Lena Arabo • Nov 3, 2013 at 10:29 pm
just not ready for school yet.
Ziri-canela Morales • Nov 3, 2013 at 10:09 pm
The sun radiates happiness towards me
Stacy Haynes • Nov 3, 2013 at 6:18 pm
A Room . Empty with no love .
Stacy Haynes • Nov 3, 2013 at 6:11 pm
My Birthday, with no one around .
Gauri Oak • Nov 3, 2013 at 1:55 pm
Candy. Sugary goodness. Exploding taste buds.
Justin Christopher-Moody • Nov 3, 2013 at 8:58 am
Love this one!
Chris Jadan • Nov 2, 2013 at 6:22 pm
Ms. B’sheart is my favorite teacher.
adviser • Nov 4, 2013 at 2:26 pm
Here’s mine: “Pandering will get you nowhere, Chris.” 😉
Ghulam Rashid • Nov 2, 2013 at 3:40 pm
Life is better in 3D. Usually.
Ghulam Rashid • Nov 2, 2013 at 3:09 pm
You can go your own way
Brandie Neal • Nov 2, 2013 at 2:13 pm
The day went on without you.
Brandie Neal • Nov 2, 2013 at 2:07 pm
No one is truly expected anymore.
Stephen Fong • Nov 1, 2013 at 10:25 pm
One chance. It’s going to count.
Murtaza Usuf • Nov 1, 2013 at 4:37 pm
Everything is going to be fine.
Nichelle • Oct 31, 2013 at 7:39 pm
The daughter’s bed was a memory.
Chris Jadan • Oct 31, 2013 at 1:55 pm
Today has been a great day.
Ziri-canela Morales • Oct 30, 2013 at 8:15 pm
“I am fine” just another lie.
Conner Rose • Oct 30, 2013 at 7:59 pm
One big day. Over yet again.
Kyle Crane • Nov 4, 2013 at 10:30 am
“It is sunny but yet dark.”
Sebastian Colmenares • Oct 30, 2013 at 6:54 pm
Government has never been at best
Aman Malik • Oct 30, 2013 at 6:11 pm
Pigs are corrupt. Humans are too.
adviser • Nov 4, 2013 at 2:27 pm
A six word story based on Animal Farm! Woo hoo! Well done, Aman! 🙂
Joseph Summerour • Oct 30, 2013 at 4:58 pm
When I Am Hungry I eat.
Ruby Kim • Oct 29, 2013 at 11:10 pm
Three People, One Couple, So Chill!
Ruby Kim • Oct 29, 2013 at 10:57 pm
At Night, All Alone, Many Scars
Rakiyah Curry • Oct 29, 2013 at 10:01 pm
“Father passed. Month october. Very sad.”- rakiyah curry (9)
Murtaza Usuf • Oct 29, 2013 at 7:13 pm
Big wedding. Nice house. Sprinkling ash.
Parker Jacobs • Oct 29, 2013 at 5:08 pm
Cold air. Screaming lungs. Asthma strikes.
Brandie Neal • Nov 3, 2013 at 8:41 am
I like this one!
Gauri Oak • Oct 29, 2013 at 3:56 pm
Lyrics. All over the page. Beautiful
Sydney • Oct 29, 2013 at 3:30 pm
Thank you!
Elie huez • Oct 29, 2013 at 3:20 pm
One life. One chance. Look forward.
Kyle Crane • Oct 29, 2013 at 2:42 pm
“I hate you so much,” Lies.
Madison Ruiz • Oct 29, 2013 at 1:37 pm
Heavy rain, last birthday, grey grave
Emily Zaleski • Oct 26, 2013 at 5:35 pm
Tsunami hits house. Everyone stays dry.
Mrs. Matynowski • Oct 25, 2013 at 2:44 pm
Magnesium burning. Gummy sacrifice. Chemistry Rocks!
Reilly Card • Oct 25, 2013 at 8:37 am
Three more words. Whoops! The End.
Ms. Pannell • Oct 24, 2013 at 8:32 am
Yesterday, today, tomorrow, Learn, Laugh, Dream.
Kyle crane • Nov 4, 2013 at 9:12 am
Baseball,”hit,smash,dive,and catch
Marlowe B'sheart • Oct 23, 2013 at 8:14 pm
Make a wish. I’m still here.
taylor • Oct 23, 2013 at 7:36 pm
Empty room. Closed doors. Everything shut away.
Sydney P. • Oct 23, 2013 at 6:22 pm
Three candles. Unattended. Ashes left behind
Reilly Card • Oct 25, 2013 at 7:56 am
I really like this one!
Stephen Toy • Oct 23, 2013 at 10:15 am
Salami sandwich lunch—his breakfast again.